In class we watched a video about a boy called Austin who was drawing a pictiure of a butterfly. He made a first draft his friends gave him feedback he followed the feedback and made 6 drafts until he got it right. WALT : Edit
I made a post about a maths problem this is what i first had. I figered out that I needed to edit my post.
I am going to make another try to make this post better.
here is my final product
I added how much the words and contries where to make my post better.