Monday, 24 February 2014


In class we watched a video about a boy called Austin who was drawing a pictiure of a butterfly. He made a first draft his friends gave him feedback he followed the feedback and made 6 drafts until he got it right.   WALT : Edit

 I made a post about a maths problem this is what i first had. I figered out that I needed to edit my post.
I am going to make another try to make this post better.
here is my final product
I added how much the words and contries where to make my post better.

1 comment:

  1. Thanks Aria - it is great to see the evidence of your learning in this new post - this helps your audience to see the process of your learning - the 'how' - which is much more important that the final product.